Yesterday around midnight the rains lashed down. Lightning and thunder bore down on the earth, lighting up the night sky. I couldn't sleep. The night danced as my muse. Twin ideas sprang from the rain. Two poems - Hunger and Thirst - starting with the same lines. One is right below. You can find the other one here. Do let me know your thoughts in the comments below.
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THIRST
As the rain sets the night sky ablaze
I toss I turn
The distant rumblings remind me
Of earthly pursuits
With sleepy eyes I search for her
Ever watchful, she sees my every move
Knowing full my intent, she stirs
But sleep does not let her go
How can she sleep when I am awake
Waah...I cry
Hush my child..
My lips find her and I drink
Amma..my milk, my comfort, my love.
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THIRST
As the rain sets the night sky ablaze
I toss I turn
The distant rumblings remind me
Of earthly pursuits
With sleepy eyes I search for her
Ever watchful, she sees my every move
Knowing full my intent, she stirs
But sleep does not let her go
How can she sleep when I am awake
Waah...I cry
Hush my child..
My lips find her and I drink
Amma..my milk, my comfort, my love.
Very touching...
ReplyDeleteNice one....
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! Amma .. my milk, my comfort, my love! Lovely. Definitely from heart.
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